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Crawling up the wall, leaving black marks
Like a spider surrounding the world by his net
You are trying to catch me in your dusty cobweb
Not asking about my innocence, the purity of heart

With enthusiasm catches my fearfull looks
Like a serial killer, hungry for a view of humiliation
You are trying to put me on your knife
Not asking about my feelings, bursting in my chest

Pour around the water of life, giving meaning to existence
Like a god of stone and steel heart
Eat my guts with a sick pleasure
Not asking about the fire in my chest, filling me

I drink your blood from the crystal cup of pleasure
Like most beautiful vampire, child of the night
Torturing your ambiguos soul and your treacherous body
In a wonderful act of revenge, drinking your pitfull yourself

You are a victim
Look at your fall
Old poem...but still kicking!
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TemariAtaje Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Great poem!
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Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ^^
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Herrbatka Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are easy with words!
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Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
RHEALLY? :la:
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Rivustin-Khalazza Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
Great poem :)
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Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
;)
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Ezoteryczka Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
Chciałabym umieć tak pisać. W dodatku w języku obcym...
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Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Na pewno umiesz ;)
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Ezoteryczka Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
Kiedyś próbowałam:P
Wyszło to irytująco prostackie:P
Dlatego ograniczam się do PL choć też marnego tworzenia wierszysk:P
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Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Mi się jeden z twoich wierszy bardzo podobał ;) Powodzenia życzę na drodze tfurczości ^^
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Ezoteryczka Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
Dzięki;)
Niedługo wrzucę kolejne... :)
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AsterTheTyrant Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
I love it :D
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:iconramsay-bolton:
Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, bud :lol:
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Ashborne-Demon Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
Nice poem. It seemed as though it was going one was and then it turned at the end.
This would make a fun base for a story revolving around multiple lives. :D
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Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, it means a lot ;)
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The-Caligula Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
Rządzisz, Ramsay. Chyba twój najlepszy.
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Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No, no, z ust CALIGULI...
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StarkArya Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Podoba mi się, panie Rams :D
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Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ohohohoho :lol:
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ItsRumpelstiltskin Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
This is awesome!
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Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks Rump :meow:
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Lord-Sethran Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You know I love it ;)
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Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Rheally? :meow:
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Lord-Sethran Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Rheally! :la:
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SodaDog Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student Artist
Very nicely detailed
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Ramsay-Bolton Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ;)
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